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Great first line!

And that photo of you at 3 is adorable.

I'm reading this because I wanted to know more about you after reading a terrific response you posted about another writer's essay about the godawful man she is dating.

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Roz Warren, Writing Coach
Roz Warren, Writing Coach

Written by Roz Warren, Writing Coach

Writing Coach Roz Warren (roSwarren@gmail.com) helps Medium writers craft better, more boost-able stories. Roz used to write for the New York Times.

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