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I hear you!

I just stopped submitting work to a pub that reworked one of my paragraphs -- without my permission -- into a list of bullet points.

I believe that bullet points don't belong in a personal essay. If you're going to do something like that? Run it by me first.

And? I'm going to tell you that I wrote that paragraph without bullet points for a reason, so keep your hands off it.

I'm glad you're making money here.

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Roz Warren, Writing Coach
Roz Warren, Writing Coach

Written by Roz Warren, Writing Coach

Writing Coach Roz Warren (roSwarren@gmail.com) helps Medium writers craft better, more boost-able stories. Roz used to write for the New York Times.

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