Roz Warren, Writing Coach
1 min readOct 17, 2019

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I know exactly how hard it was.

In fact, in an early draft, after the part about my Tribe being a bunch of smart asses who were going want to DO THIS if told not to, I had the following parenthetical:

(I’m looking at you, P.G. Barnett and Roy.)

But then I kept wanting to add additional names to that two person list of Smart Asses, so I ended up deleting it.

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Roz Warren, Writing Coach
Roz Warren, Writing Coach

Written by Roz Warren, Writing Coach

Writing Coach Roz Warren (roSwarren@gmail.com) helps Medium writers craft better, more boost-able stories. Roz used to write for the New York Times.

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