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Outstanding first sentence!

Although I'd think about deleting the word "probably."

Also -- Yikes! Sorry. I know exactly how a gut punch like that feels.

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Roz Warren, Writing Coach
Roz Warren, Writing Coach

Written by Roz Warren, Writing Coach

Writing Coach Roz Warren (roSwarren@gmail.com) helps Medium writers craft better, more boost-able stories. Roz used to write for the New York Times.

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