She was fresh from her shock treatments at Bellevue, and since I was the youngest, I had to sit next to her.

Great sentence!

There are a lot of great sentences in here.

I enjoy your sense of humor.

Although I’d like to say that there is nothing wrong with middle-aged women who show up for book talks covered with cat hair.

This describes most of my friends.

And me, before my cat died.

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Editor and Writing Coach Roz Warren (roSwarren@gmail.com) can help you improve and publish your work.