Roz Warren, Writing Coach
1 min readDec 18, 2019

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She was fresh from her shock treatments at Bellevue, and since I was the youngest, I had to sit next to her.

Great sentence!

There are a lot of great sentences in here.

I enjoy your sense of humor.

Although I’d like to say that there is nothing wrong with middle-aged women who show up for book talks covered with cat hair.

This describes most of my friends.

And me, before my cat died.

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Roz Warren, Writing Coach
Roz Warren, Writing Coach

Written by Roz Warren, Writing Coach

Writing Coach Roz Warren (roSwarren@gmail.com) helps Medium writers craft better, more boost-able stories. Roz used to write for the New York Times.

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