She was fresh from her shock treatments at Bellevue, and since I was the youngest, I had to sit next to her.

Great sentence!

There are a lot of great sentences in here.

I enjoy your sense of humor.

Although I’d like to say that there is nothing wrong with middle-aged women who show up for book talks covered with cat hair.

This describes most of my friends.

And me, before my cat died.

Writing Coach/Medium Sherpa Roz Warren(https://muckrack.com/roz-warren) (roSwarren@gmail.com) writes for everyone from the New York Times to the Funny Times.