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You had me with that title.

How the hell could I resist that?

Although as an editor I'd recommend a period rather than a comma after the word "dead."

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Roz Warren, Writing Coach
Roz Warren, Writing Coach

Written by Roz Warren, Writing Coach

Writing Coach Roz Warren (roSwarren@gmail.com) helps Medium writers craft better, more boost-able stories. Roz used to write for the New York Times.

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