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You should.

You are their role model.

If you don't wear a helmet, you're telling them that wearing a helmet isn't important.

Okay now I'll get down off my soapbox and tell you how much I LOVED this piece.

Other than that line about the helmet

Okay, so maybe I'm still kind of on my soapbox.

But you're a really good writer! I like the way your brain works. I hate the thought of your putting it at risk by not wearing a helmet.

Okay, I'll be quiet now.

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Roz Warren, Writing Coach
Roz Warren, Writing Coach

Written by Roz Warren, Writing Coach

Writing Coach Roz Warren (roSwarren@gmail.com) helps Medium writers craft better, more boost-able stories. Roz used to write for the New York Times.

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